http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2012/02/17/through-this-door-chapter-6/ Where our past is never very long ago Sat, 18 May 2013 04:38:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2012/02/17/through-this-door-chapter-6/comment-page-1/#comment-201526 kevinf Mon, 20 Feb 2012 19:31:25 +0000 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/?p=15874#comment-201526 Much better writing, but I agree with Ellen. A lot of detail left out, but not so much as to make it bad. Nice touch, though, with the thought “If I can work for Mrs. Williams and all of her trivial fussiness, I can work for anybody!”

]]> http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2012/02/17/through-this-door-chapter-6/comment-page-1/#comment-200772 HokieKate Sat, 18 Feb 2012 14:58:57 +0000 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/?p=15874#comment-200772 Very sweet and tidy.

]]> http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2012/02/17/through-this-door-chapter-6/comment-page-1/#comment-200675 Ellen Sat, 18 Feb 2012 03:48:04 +0000 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/?p=15874#comment-200675 Well, bing, bang, boom, and it’s over. I kind of like being able to skip over the boring stuff like, you know, school and hard work, but it would have been nice if we could have had a leeetle more story. Still, this was very enjoyable. Thanks for letting us stick our big toes back in the serial water.

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