http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2011/08/12/on-the-trails-of-the-old-kaibab-chapter-3/ Where our past is never very long ago Thu, 23 May 2013 00:34:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2011/08/12/on-the-trails-of-the-old-kaibab-chapter-3/comment-page-1/#comment-81960 LAT Sat, 13 Aug 2011 02:09:08 +0000 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/?p=10687#comment-81960 As a redhead, I just want to point out to the author that all redheads aren’t related But I suppose there has to be some way to connect Helen with her father…in any case, I’m definitely loving the wild west flavor of this one!

]]> http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2011/08/12/on-the-trails-of-the-old-kaibab-chapter-3/comment-page-1/#comment-81936 Ellen Fri, 12 Aug 2011 21:54:06 +0000 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/?p=10687#comment-81936 Good call, Coffinberry. Sometimes I find the attempts to create colloquial speech are just plain distracting. Still, I am enjoying the writing in this one. It’s good enough to make me forget that I’m reading a story, and that’s my litmus test.

]]> http://www.keepapitchinin.org/2011/08/12/on-the-trails-of-the-old-kaibab-chapter-3/comment-page-1/#comment-81919 Coffinberry Fri, 12 Aug 2011 19:05:56 +0000 http://www.keepapitchinin.org/?p=10687#comment-81919 It always amazes me how people know how to spell what they only hear with their ears… “Vaughn”. Now, why wouldn’t she hear the name in the story as “old Von”?

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